theBadger believes in giving truthful criticism. I hope you don't mind moose.
I like your 'band'a lot. You clearly have a talent for arranging multiple parts and making them sound distinct and different. Often with your songs it works well.
On this track I found the 'band' distracting and unnecessary.
Very nicely done but...
I yearned to hear the solo 12 string part on its own.
Perhaps subtly include the bass part because that actually added something. And shorten the arrangement to around 3 mins.
Despite the fact that tB knows nothing... you know i'm right because that's how you originally composed the piece.
Trust your instincts my very musically talented friend. :grin:
Edit: Oh yes, and unusually for a species with a very short attention span, I listened to your track all the way through with a big grin of enjoyment... twice... before posting this comment.